LPer looking for feedback

I am currently working on an LP of Mark of the Ninja. I have completed three LPs in the past with a friend; the one I’m happiest with is of the GameCube title GUN.

Aside from not having a thread on LP Zone, the GUN LP has a similar feel to what I’m working now, and I’m looking to improve my format (e.g. when/where to fast forward, pacing, how best to show off extras and glitches, etc.). Any advice would be appreciated (with one caveat: while I know I can improve my audio mixing, I don’t exactly have anywhere that’s soundproof-able in my home, so I use DeNoise in Adobe Audition when I can).